The Campfire Chronicles

reported by Miss Camp

October 4, 2002


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Citizen of the Month Safety Patrol Subject & Predicate
Ways to Make "Long O" Ways to Make "Long A" From Story Map to a Paragraph

CITIZEN OF THE MONTH

JILL

A “Citizen of the Month” is selected from each class and honored at a school-wide assembly. Students who are selected have demonstrated the characteristics of good citizenship. Criteria include:

  • A positive attitude
  • Using good manners
  • Being thoughtful and helpful
  • Showing Responsibility
  • Putting forth best effort
  • Showing concern for others
  • Displaying good sportsmanship

Congratulations Jill!
SAFETY PATROL TO BEGIN OCT. 16

Safety Patrol is a community service activity for third graders at our school. Two students from each third grade classroom are selected to serve on the Safety Patrol each week.

Third Graders who are on Safety Patrol stand in the school hallways in the morning as the students arrive, and monitor how students treat each other as they walk to their classrooms.

SUBJECT & PREDICATE

Every sentence has a subject and a predicate.

The subject is who or what the sentence is about.

The predicate is what the subject is doing or being. For example:

Kevin played football at the park on Saturday because his team had a game.

Subject: Kevin
Predicate: played football

WAYS TO MAKE THE "LONG O" SOUND

o silent e oa oe ough ow
go
no
so
Joseph
hope
rope
home
note
remote
goat, boat,
oat, coat,
moat, float,
toad, road,
soak, cloak,
loaf
doe
hoe
Joe
though
dough
doughnut
crow
tow
below
mow
bow
know

WAYS TO MAKE THE "LONG A" SOUND

a silent e ay ai eigh ea
bagel
Casey
table
lake, fake,
bake, shape,
place, safe,
taste,pate,
take, cake
say, way,
away, stay,
may, pay,
bay, hay,
play
wait, bait,
pail, rail,
hail, sail,
nail, mail,
snail, mailbox,
saint, faint
eight
freight
weigh
great

TURNING STORY MAPS INTO PARAGRAPHS

Before we write a paragraph, it is helpful to have a plan, to map out what we are going to write. Just as an architect designs a house plan before the building starts, we can use a graphic organizer to make a writing plan before the actual writing starts. When we turn a Story Map (one type of graphic organizer) into a one-paragraph Summary, we take the sentences from the graphic organizer and put them in this order:

  1. An introductory sentence that introduces the book and what it’s generally about (main idea).
  2. The problem (can be copied right from the story map).
  3. The events (in order) that help solve the problem (can be copied from the story map). We use “transitional words” such as “first, next, then, after that, later, finally” to help show that the events are happening in order.
  4. The solution (can be copied right from the story map)
  5. The concluding sentence. This sentence has an important job. It has to tie back to the introductory sentence.

Since we can copy the problem, events, and solution right off of the graphic organizer, writing a paragraph is the easy part! Most of the “thinking” goes into making the Story Map! When we are writing our paragraph, the only sentences we have to think a lot about are the first one and last one!

This week, we all worked together to make a Story Map and one-paragraph summary of The Giant Jam Sandwich! (see below). We could have combined several of our events together, but most of the book was about making the sandwich, & the problem wouldn’t have been solved if even one of our events was missing, so we included all that we decided were important. (NOTE: Most of our stories will only have 3 – 5 events.)

GRAPHIC ORGANIZER
(STORY MAP)

Characters: Bap the Baker, Farmer Seed, Mayor Muddlenut, 4 million wasps

Setting: The town of Itching Down, hot summer

Problem: Four million wasps flew into town and were a nuisance.

Solution: Almost all of the wasps are trapped in a giant jam sandwich.

The Events:

  1. Mayor Muddlenut called a meeting for the villagers.
  2. Bap the Baker came up with a plan to make a giant jam sandwich and trap the wasps in it.
  3. The villagers worked together to make dough.
  4. They baked the bread.
  5. They brought the bread to Farmer Seed's field.
  6. Six men sawed two slices of bread off the loaf.
  7. Farmer Seed used his tractor to spread jam and butter on one slice of bread.
  8. The wasps went to eat the jam and got stuck.
  9. Helicopters and a flying tractor dropped the other slice of bread onto the sandwich.
THE PARAGRAPH

        The story The Giant Jam Sandwich is about a town that has a problem. Four million wasps flew into town and were a nuisance. First, Mayor Muddlenut called a meeting for the villagers. Bap the Baker came up with a plan to make a giant jam sandwich and trap the wasps in it. Next, the villagers worked together to make dough and to bake the bread. After that, they brought the bread to Farmer Seed’s field. Then six men sawed two slices of bread off the loaf. Farmer Seed used his tractor to spread jam and butter on one slice of bread. The wasps went to eat the jam and got stuck. Finally, helicopters and a flying tractor dropped the other slice of bread onto the sandwich. Almost all of the wasps were trapped in the giant jam sandwich. The villagers solved the town’s problem even though three wasps got away.

Alternate Concluding Sentences suggested by class:
  1. The villagers solved the town’s problem and the birds had a feast for a hundred weeks.

  2. The villagers solved the town’s problem and had a big party to celebrate.

Alternate Introductory Sentence:
The story The Giant Jam Sandwich is about a community that worked together to solve a problem.

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